Fangala the Flying Feline

Angie, you have no idea how much your reviews mean to me. I can't begin to thank you enough... but I can try! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful! So short, so sweet, so poetic! Usually it's not recommended to talk about poetry in poetry, but you pulled it off in your first line. It vanishes so quickly; ...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! Be careful, he said. “Be careful” coming from Avery is like “slow down” coming from a turtle. This is a guy that lights incense before ...

Again, good job. The dialogue between Isabelle and Anya is stiff. It seems like they make peace too fast. One second they hate each other and the next they're spilling ...

Review time! “How may I help you?” she asked with a wide smile. “She’s going to be staying here,” my dad roughly said, straightening the tie on his suit. “Oh, ...

No problems here. Fantastic as always, but you might want to add more dialogue. Also, I'd like to see a detailed description of the setting. You have good descriptions of ...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! dommy: sorry about the vagueness of the Tower card. Tarot is an ongoing theme throughout the story, so it'll get more explanation as the chapters ...

Knowing that "rose" has a special meaning, I say keep it. I wouldn't dare rip personal symbols from a poem. :D

God, I can't believe nobody's raving about this yet! This is hilarious... in a dark way. Is that what you were aiming for? In any case, it's brilliant. Oddly enough, ...

My first ever non-fantasy novel! Please read and review, and if you have any questions regarding your astrological sun sign/birth chart, just PM me. Chapter One Ice water sprayed everywhere. ...

Bravo! You continue to astound me. One quick thing: I would expect Isabelle to have a more extreme reaction when Carl corners her by her locker. I mean, wasn't it ...

Ew, Carl's so gross! I felt utter revulsion at what he did to Isabelle... even if it was just a dream. Great character building. Again, amazing. It moves along at ...

Indeed, a weird dream. Weird in that it's so realistic. I understand the difficulties of writing a perfectly balanced dream, not too funky and not too down-to-earth. You might consider ...

Perfect. I have almost no problems or nit-picks. Your opening is strong, but slightly unbelievable. Three years old? Then again, if you're aiming for perverted, you're right on target. Also, ...

Hurray for Snoink! And hurray for e.e. cummings! (Personally, I adore the lower case style.) As for the poem: lovely. Normally, exclamation marks should be used sparingly, but this is ...